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A Piece That Is Long Overdue

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Post by Bob The Enzyte Guy July 24th 2009, 9:53 pm

I used "The Message" beat by Dr. Dre and it's dedicated to my closest friend

If can get back the sands of time, this is what I’ll do
Go to your house before you got to that fool
But I still can’t believe that this happen to my brother
And it might be because a dispute between colors1`
You’re only 17 , believe that if you didn’t went to that scene
We’ll be at your house, on the couch, watching t.v
Instead of laying on a hard bed, ready to eat hard bread
Looking at the window at the door that’s ahead
This sentence shoudn’t happen, it should be less
Now the regrets, is not going to your place and recess
You’re good kid man, you’re there for your peers
You’re a strong young man who never shed any tears
You know me too well and you know that I’m not lying
When I say that I feel you’re pain and I’m doing your crying
But now you’re gone, and and this is your serenade
So good-bye my brother, I’ll see you in a couple of decades

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Post by btnhmami9803 July 24th 2009, 10:04 pm

Tight work Bob. Deep stuff. Sorry about your friend.


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